I love the beginning! It was a beautiful transition, a beautiful introduction into your characters, and a beautiful and relatable way to grab the reader's attention. This piece is very intriguing to me, because I feel as if, although it is your voice saying the words, that it is the story of someone else. As if you are the person being talked about, not the person telling. I could be completely off, but the mystery of not having names and the familiarity of the walk that I feel like I've taken before or wish to take again is just astounding. I give you whole hearted kudos on this piece, and feel like it doesn't need any additional sounds. Gorgeous, simply gorgeous, and extraordinarily beautiful. (I say this again because I just listened to it for the 3rd time). I hope to hear more just like it!
Very nice - introspective and kinda moody.
ReplyDeleteI love the beginning! It was a beautiful transition, a beautiful introduction into your characters, and a beautiful and relatable way to grab the reader's attention. This piece is very intriguing to me, because I feel as if, although it is your voice saying the words, that it is the story of someone else. As if you are the person being talked about, not the person telling. I could be completely off, but the mystery of not having names and the familiarity of the walk that I feel like I've taken before or wish to take again is just astounding. I give you whole hearted kudos on this piece, and feel like it doesn't need any additional sounds. Gorgeous, simply gorgeous, and extraordinarily beautiful. (I say this again because I just listened to it for the 3rd time). I hope to hear more just like it!
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